The Devil Smiles (My Song For MJ)

My song for mj - i'm sharing only a little bit what do u think

he speaks to you in a soft seductive voice
he offers you paradise
he hand you a contract
he wants you to sign your life away
he speaks to you in his soft beautiful voice

(Female vocal)
Everybody wants you
I'm gonna give you the world


Repeat Chorus
so the devil smiles
you smile wright back
he lifts his hand
you should slap it back
he offers you favours
he expects them back

The lyrics are pretty cool (from "artistic" point of view and as a song....I don't mean I'd like that to happen to MJ, I am looking at it as a song...as art. And there HAS been so many "devil" around him, trying to get control over MJ an dtrying to scheme to get his money, so it does fit to his life in some ways...Just to make that clear.). I think one coudl make a great video to that song. I already have loads of ideas! :lol: But I'd change the "he" into a "she" in the song...you know...make it a woman...You know, sort of a "devil in disguise"...seducing MJ to give his life and money away and to get him into trouble and all that....(would make more sense too since you have the female vocal in it too...).

"you smile wright back" you mean "right back"?

I sometimes make up song gear for mikes voice too.