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    this chapter gone.
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    Wow...i didn't know i'd get so many loylay followers. I mean not too many people have told me anything, but just by looking at how many views my thread is getting...i can tell i have supporters and i just want to say thak you all ! I appreciate it very much !

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    this chapter gone.
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    deleted chapter
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    I apologize for this. but this need to be a different story, if possible.
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    if you guys look at chapter one you will see a nicer story and very interesting too, is in the making.
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    Hey everyone, i just wanted to remind you of my deepest appreciation for your undying support of my story. Without you , the little people, it could never have been a success. So, i just want to say...thank you, thank you...



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    Woe, i can see you are all ready for a next part. Well, alright then, just give 20 mins.

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    Chapter 8




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    hey there everyone. I know i took a while, but you know how it is, one can only post a fn fic when one has opportunity. Anyways, with out further delay..here is the next part.

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    Chapt. 8 contd...


    End of chapter 8
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    Default Re: Mrs. Jackson

    Well, this is a very long story, it is nice, but the whole situation in it sounds senseless and absurd. Probably was better if MJ was not mentioned at all in this story, you could think of some fictional pop-star, because first it is more about a married woman's affair and her boyfriend and second with MJ as one of the characters it is hard to believe in it all. What concerns the style of writing - I like it, you did a great job. I wonder what will be a happy end and for whom.
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    thank you Magic Girl for your honest and sincere in put. . Umm i was planning to make this controversial. I'm taking my time with each part because i want everything to sound just right. I'm glad i did this long enough for a fan to tell me their real feelings on this.

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    anyways there is a next part coming up that "Might" cheer everyone up.

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    then looking forward for the next part

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