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This thread is for all the writers out there!

Post some of your best, or favorite, works in this thread! I would love to read what others have written!

I'll start...

I wrote this one day at work when we were slow. I totally forgot about it (I wrote it on the back of a receipt) and I found it in my purse when I was cleaning it out the other day..

I remember writing it shortly after Michael died...

It is currently untitled..

The principle of living is to do the best you can and to do so with what you have.
If you find that you are needing, look closely for a hand.
If you take that hand, it's your turn to give back.
It's the circle of humanity, the faith of the human race.
You have to give to receive, and you should always give more than you take,
And just enough for what you need.
The ending of all things good may some day soon be greed.

I think that it is unfinished though..I feel like I could add more to it...

Anyways...I want to read what you all have written!
 
I write lots of poems, I love writing them because thats the only way I express my feelings, because I'm the type of person who hides my feelings, I keep them botteled up inside. I also write poems in my native language which is welsh. This is just one of the poems I wrote.


The Poet

Trust when broken can’t be fixed
Like a poets broken heart
Through his pain , his creativity shines
Through his suffering flows words he never knew

The pen and paper becomes his friends
Searching for the right way to explain his feelings
Listening to every sound his heart makes
Carrying them very delicate onto the blank paper that lay in front

The poet interviews his heart
Listening to every sudden whisper
Not missing one breath of life
His heart becomes the writer.

The words start writing themselves
Every sentence reveals the truth
The heart becomes alight , with a warm smile
Piece by piece the heart begins to shine again

His feelings on paper
Thoughts shared with anyone who cares
Now the world knows why he is broken hearted
The heart itself has achieved more than he could have ever imagined.
 
Wow! I really love what you wrote! It was very, very good...I would like to read more of what you have written!!

Here is another one by me...

'Worriers'

Let the worriers do the worrying for you.
Sometimes it's more fun to soak up the sun,
and be naive for once.
Just don't worry about it.
Go out and have a little fun,
and enjoy yourself for once.
I promise you'll feel much better.
I know that you'll feel brand new.
When your worries don't envelope you,
You see from a clearer view.
When stress isn't running your life,
You'll feel like a whole new you.
Relaxation is the key to it all.
If you don't relax every now and then,
you surely will take quite a fall.
 
poem I wrote for a creative writing class a couple of years ago:

Beautiful Ideal

I live in Beauty,
Can you see it?

Eyelashes lifted, curled, and colored by M.A.C flutter
Against falsely blushing cheeks,
Beautiful in effect.

Jet black curls frame azure eyes,
Innocent features camouflaging roguish tendencies,
Beautiful by desire.

Wits tango, back forth, back forth
As the age old battle of the sexes continues,
Beautiful by complexity.

Hearts shudder to a stop as painful rejection
Becomes apparent, tears a steady friend.
Beautiful by experience.

Phoenix-like, the soul is reborn, mended, healed,
Able to love again, and find it’s mate.
Beautiful in survival.
 
strawberrypie999 said:
Wow! I really love what you wrote! It was very, very good...I would like to read more of what you have written!!

Here is another one by me...

'Worriers'

Let the worriers do the worrying for you.
Sometimes it's more fun to soak up the sun,
and be naive for once.
Just don't worry about it.
Go out and have a little fun,
and enjoy yourself for once.
I promise you'll feel much better.
I know that you'll feel brand new.
When your worries don't envelope you,
You see from a clearer view.
When stress isn't running your life,
You'll feel like a whole new you.
Relaxation is the key to it all.
If you don't relax every now and then,
you surely will take quite a fall.
Click to expand...

Wow, that's really inspirational!
 
Aw, thank you !! I wrote it at work when I was having a bad day...Maybe I should actually try and get some work done at work sometime =] LOL

Here is on I wrote one night before bed...very simple.

'Lord Please Help Us'

I want laughter
I want peace
I want happiness
Help us pleaase
I want smiles
I want to gain
I dont want rain falls
I dont want pain
Lord please help us
Learn to live
Lord please help us
Learn to give
Now we need you
More than ever
Lord please help us
Come together.
 
This is another poem I've written

Words, Feelings, Thoughts.

My words they drift so far away
On the road they pass you by.
Drifting so far, never coming home,
So peaceful and mild, they travel on their own.

My feelings never saw light,
They remain in the shadows, where they must fight.
Always spoken but never heard,
This life they lead, it’s all absurd.

In my head my voice seems loud,
But when I speak, there comes no sound.
Silence speak thousand words,
That’ll show them what they deserve.

My thoughts they shiver and hide away,
Waiting for that perfect moment to be revealed one day.
But if they, like my words pass you by,
There’d be no meaning to who I am.
 
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