Song writing

[geekgirl101]

I mentioned a while ago I was wanting to work on song writing. Well I've written a couple of songs, although not too sure how good they really are and if they'd be worth putting pen to paper, however there is one I've written last night aswell as with the music and this one I'm confident in carries a lot of theology and also contains a reference to Michael Jackson. It's going to sound amateur since I've no proper equipment for sound recording, however when I've put it together I'll link it here as a demo.

Oops, realised this is in the wrong subforum.

 

[MJfan10]

Can't wait to hear it!!

 

[raz2911]

Can't wait could you post the lyrics please

 

[geekgirl101]

I'll post the lyrics soon.

Right now I have a 1 minute demo available. Take note it's a demo, I'm getting better sound recording equipment and software and working on training my voice to be a bit stronger too since I haven't practiced singing properly for like 10 years so it's a little weak, so the finalised version will likely sound different.

Download - Melanie Jean - Gone Too Far Demo.mp3

This topic should really be in the Dear Michael forum. :blush:

 

[geekgirl101]

Ooof, I'm banging my head repeatedly on my desk at the moment since the majority of the song is rap and I do not have a rappers' voice and using voice transformers to try and make it more listenable just isn't working. This is one of those dilemmas where I either get help to improve my voice more so that it's listenable in spoken form or I do a joint project with someone who can fill in for me in those areas.

Anyways, if you think you can assist or fancy taking a listen at the full version of the 2nd demo attempt it's downloadable here, but please don't go distributing it without my permission first as I'm a little ashamed of the quality and am striving to perfect it with better equipment:

Download - Melanie Hoyle - Gone Too Far (Demo V2).mp3