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My Songs :)

OMG! This is the first time I've seen this thread - where have I been?! Seriously Ryan I love your work.

That one you most recently posted "I hate what you've become"... wow, that really reminds me of how I felt recently about a then-close friend :clapping:

A lot of your lyrics take me back to experiences I've had myself - and that's amazing that you can do that. To me it means you've got a special talent with song writing.

Now, like everyone else has been saying, will you PLEASE somehow let us hear the melody that goes with these songs??? :cheeky:
 
Sharlene said:
That one you most recently posted "I hate what you've become"... wow, that really reminds me of how I felt recently about a then-close friend :clapping: :
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I love that song too! :heart:
 
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Thanks you guys I'm working on my confidence and I'm going to go for it soon :). I haven't posted any songs recently I'll add some more today :)
 
*dying, not dieing. (I would correct that error ASAP.)

Spelling errors aside, great songs. You've clearly got a talent for songwriting. Just mind your spelling and you'll do fine. (Yes, I'm one of those annoying spelling jackasses lol. I apologize.)

PS: If you've got a computer microphone, you should record these songs and upload them on to YouTube or something, so we can hear what they (and you) sound like. You could probably acquire some helpful critiques/feedback over at YT too.
 
Do you know some producer? Or some people who working in music career? Then you can ask them to record a song :D..
 
raz2911 said:
^^ Thats fine, I was always terrible at spelling :lol: thanks for letting me know I'll change them now :)
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NP. You've got quite a few, actually, but I was too lazy to list them all. If you ever make it big, I volunteer to be the editor lol.

Seriously, though, it's good material that most people can relate to. Do consider the YouTube suggestion.
 
Heres a new song:

Sometimes I want to die
She grew up
An only child.
No one was there for her,
Mum and Dad;
They don't understand.
So when times get tough,
She locks herself in her room:

(Chorus)
Asking whats the point of life?
Is it really worth the hassle?
Should I live or should I die?
Would they care even if I did?
Sometimes I want to die
I really want to die

He is a little bit different,
Doesn't follow like the crowd do.
So they give him a hard time,
Push him around.
So he drowns out the pain,
In the only way he knows.
But at the end of the day,
He still finds himself:

(Chorus)
Asking whats the point of life?
Is it really worth the hassle?
Should I live or should I die?
Would they care even if I did?
Sometimes I want to die
I really want to die

(Bridge)
Then there comes a point in life,
When you realise.
That life is for living,
So enjoy it.
Don't you let them bring you down,
Don't you let them make you.

Ask whats the point of life,
Is it really worth the hassle?
Should I live or should I die?
Would they care even if I did?
Some times I want to die
 
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