BUMPER SNIPPET
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Here's the thing, this wasn't marked by my teacher but rather an anonymous examiner. This grade was for my end-of-school exams. What's so shocking is that I did so well in the past and I've somehow botched it up for the real thing.
Then it is probably a question of originality. Lately, there has been too much hype about MJ. Since his death almost everyone has all of sudden become his biggest fan. Thus the subject wasn't maybe as intriguing as if you wrote about something unexpected, or remember what Mike used to say "the opposite of unexpected" in order to create the wow effect.
Sometimes we have to forget personal affection and empathy and try to give the best of ourselves by creating new things or at least by including unexpected elements. It is extremely and painfully difficult to explain how and why we're touched by MJ's magic with words. There are no words for that.
But if you create the wow effect and if the teacher asks you where does your inspiration come from, then you could proudly say: 'from Michael Jackson, he made me believe in magic'.