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My first poem that I´ve created!!!

whosbad

whosbad

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Hi, fellow Michael fans!!!

Please leave your opinion under this poem. During I was writing it I was constantly thinking about Michael. I think that he has helped me to create such a poem.

Many years ago,
an angel stole my heart.
He sang those songs which touched my soul
He gave me hope when I was low.

The people around me couldn´t understand
that I was affected by such a man.
Some laughed, some teased, some of them became mad,
but I was sure that my adoring wasn´t bad.

Now this angel has flown away
on his wings of love ´cause he couldn´t stay.
This world is filled with hate and crime
His heart became shattered - and also did mine.

My heart cried out - I´ve lost my voice
I couldn´t sing anymore - I needed Michael´s noise.
But I´ve found a humble friend
with whom I can talk to because she understands.

She told me that Michael was still here
´cause she saw him in a dream - he didn´t disappear.
I´ve realized this friend was a gift from Allah
He helped me to heal my soul - Allahu akbar!

Michael´s around us wherever we go,
We can still feel his magic - and our love will grow.
Thanks, Michael, for this gift of love
Keep watching us down here - now from above.

by whosbad, created 13th January 2011
 
I absolutely love this poem. Thank you for asking me to read this one! This is filled with so much strong emotion. You did an amazing job with every aspect of this piece; such a heart felt poem. :heart:
 
Thanks, Ginny!!! :)
This friend I was speaking about - she´s a member of the MJTP-site - like me. She became a fan after Michael´s death. But she really lifted me up when she told me her story. It´s real what I meant - everything in that poem happened in my life. Maybe that´s because it´s good. :cheeky:
This friend also read that poem - and began to cry. She really loved that I was mentioning her. A real friend, ya know?? :yes:

Take care, girl!!!
Don´t stop ´til you get enough!!! :punk:
LOVE
Vera
 
Thanks so much. But, please - don´t cry. This poem is created to create hope and peace. :better:
To answer your question: No, I´m not from an arabic country.
I´m from Austria - but my hubby comes from Algeria. So, he can speak arabic. I can understand some things - but sadly I cannot speak this language.
But I work in the Islamic Center of Vienna - as a secretary. :D

What´s your profession??
 
Aww wow, that was beautiful,

Michael would definatly be proud of that I know I would be if I was him :)

Your a talented writer, keep writing!

xxxx
 
Thanks to all for your lovely comments!!! I´ll try to write another poem. But it needs time. Please be patient!!! :)
 
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